I chose this poster due to the fact that i think it appeals to the readers eyes very well. The balance I used makes me feel that it catches the readers eyes with little trouble. Although the blank space in the middle is my main focus on improvement. The lines at the top that say the date, time and place really go together nicely as they are placed in a strategic pattern to read from top to bottom after reading the main title. The titles scale is way bigger then the rest of the work and is diagonally aligned to add a little character to the work. The bottom of the page has three sections pretty evenly spread in what you could either call lines or planes. The planes are evenly spread in order to balance the work and create a more dynamic design. Although i do like the design they could be positioned better so the tops of the writing are not hyphened and flow better with the poster. When I am fixing up my poster that is one thing I’m going to make sure that is all even so the reading can flow with the words better and not get confused. Also Im going to get rid of the negative space by either making the words bigger or adjusting the lines in order to make the poster as a whole more balanced so the reader doesn’t look at the negative space as a negative reaction of the event.

My favorite poster remix by Zach Nelson